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Primordial Heavenly Dao God
Author: Azure Dragon Editor: Azure Dragon
Prologue
In blank space in small Space-time River a lotus bloom with Divine light. There are seven petals with seven divine lights. Those Seven colors are five elements and two natural elements. Gold, Wood, Fire, Water and Earth are five elements; Wind and Thunder-Lightning are two natural elements.
The core of lotus base has a black and white Taiji Diagram that represents Yin and Yang keep circling. In the center of Yin-Yang Taiji hovering three small different color seeds. Those are seeds of Primordial Lotus; gray color lotus seed represent Primordial Chaos, black seed represent Destruction and just around them circling a seed with silver and black color.
Primordial Chaos give birth Yin-Yang; Yin-Yang gives birth five elements and five elements give birth myriad of creation. After creation there are always destruction. So Destruction is part of creation. Without destruction there is no creation and without creation there is no destruction.
In small Space-time river Primordial Lotus drifting space. There are no concepts of light in space; Time is drifting like water. In Primordial Lotus core Lotus seed a scripture slowly forming. When this scripture complete it will become heaven-defying supreme scripture in whole heaven and earth.
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Divine realm
A genius that born in tens of millions years has born. He sweeps across whole divine realm with his cultivation and body. In just five hundred years he became a man that every one look up to; after thousand year he became one the ten strongest in divine realm; at tens of thousands years he became strongest in divine realm. People of divine realm called him Realm God. But after hundreds of thousands year he suddenly despaired. But how has he despaired still mystery.
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One billion years after legendary genius Realm God despaired, anther genius has born. He is the first genius who duel array and formation master. He creates a legend in array and formation; he combines both array and formation into one. He create a heaven-defying array-formation that capable of create whole world. People of divine realm called him Array-formation God. After long time passed, he too despaired like legendary.
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As time passed anther genius has born in divine realm. He was genius in weapon refining; he creates evolution in realm of weapon refining. He forged a heaven-defying weapon that capable of cut anything. Divine realm called him Refining God. But after many years he too despaired in thin air with his legendary weapon.
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After long time, a genius in alchemy has born. He creates many legendary pills that help people. With his heaven and earth born cauldron he create legendary pill that can extent life of cultivator in any realm. He named Alchemy God by Divine realm people. But he too despaired like other three legendary gods.
But no one knows that behind success of four gods a Primordial Lotus that help them quietly.